tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5695539920543910693.post4157210027974560451..comments2024-03-27T02:16:12.946-07:00Comments on QUANTUM TANTRA: Delight in Disordernick herberthttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12806604589435880363noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5695539920543910693.post-3253181689689560782018-01-06T05:41:36.087-08:002018-01-06T05:41:36.087-08:00I'll have what Hillery's having.I'll have what Hillery's having.nick herberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12806604589435880363noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5695539920543910693.post-49861610474544688232018-01-06T04:05:57.389-08:002018-01-06T04:05:57.389-08:00Yes, although I live in Germany I'm a fan of d...Yes, although I live in Germany I'm a fan of disorder and discord. It always gives food for thought.<br /><br />Strange Fruit, too<br /><br />Discordia knocked three times on the door,<br />Then threw her golden apple on the floor.<br />She thought it’d be fun<br />To attach a note which said:<br />“To the prettiest one.”<br /><br />All the goddesses beamed, then squabbled and presumed,<br /Paul Hilleryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17405355876005165587noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5695539920543910693.post-86141870830798198862018-01-05T22:20:54.643-08:002018-01-05T22:20:54.643-08:00Yes. I like the ruminations and observations and j...Yes. I like the ruminations and observations and juxtapositions of visual and auditory disorders.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17141911272357683953noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5695539920543910693.post-41144627317616578292018-01-05T20:08:59.559-08:002018-01-05T20:08:59.559-08:00Very Sweet RumiNations, all of you
Very Sweet RumiNations, all of you<br />Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5695539920543910693.post-10473935381134928572018-01-05T17:37:38.615-08:002018-01-05T17:37:38.615-08:00nice observation. I felt the disorder in reading i...nice observation. I felt the disorder in reading it but<br />not at the level of awareness. Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5695539920543910693.post-81937039876006723282018-01-05T15:53:47.171-08:002018-01-05T15:53:47.171-08:00Note that Herrick's poem is packed with the ki...Note that Herrick's poem is packed with the kind of ear-catching disorder he celebrates. Most of the lines don't rhyme well or scan unless twisted off kilter. "A lawn about the shoulders thrown/Into a fine dis-trax-ee-own" is one way to push lines 2 and 3 into proper rhyming couplet form. Herrick playfully invites the reader to notice and to correct his deliberate poetic nick herberthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12806604589435880363noreply@blogger.com